Everyone is basically strangers
on the first day of an art seminar. It is somewhat
uncomfortable before the first lunch break because
nobody knows anything about each other, and you would
never want to be called up in front of a class full
of strangers. But that's what happened to me, as she
selected my painting, "Pepper Pot Soup" as her third
painting critique of the first morning of the week's
session. Oh God! Mortification sets in. You
always expected that Helen was going to let you have
it, both barrels, no punches pulled. Never in a condescending
way but also never gently. Her attitude was always
forthright: "you're here to learn this stuff. I would
be shortchanging you if I glossed over your errors."
It was the kind of honest critique we hungered for
yet feared! It's a little disconcerting in front of
a room full of people to whom you haven't even said
"Hello" yet; but it is just the kind of criticism
one needs. "Teach me more! Whip it into me!"
"Jan," she began as I snapped
the picture above, "this is a very nice painting."
(Jan waits for other shoe to drop.) "It has many technically
nice features but..." (oh here it comes!) "you should
never sign your name on a painting at a slant! Always
horizontal, easy to read." (Big Van Wyk smile. Bigger
sigh from fidgeting, nervous artist!)
Helen critiquing one of Jan's paintingsShe
did find improvable things with the painting - and
she was absolutely, completely correct in finding
the weak points I had overlooked. "The pot should
be warmer" - and she added a nice warm Umber &
Sienna glaze to it". "Perhaps the fine detail
of the edge of the cloth should be pulled back a bit
so as not to detract from the focal point: the red
pepper," and she painted out some of the detail. And
on she went, through the works of more than 20 artists.
The first break in the morning was a great stress
reliever and after we had all chatted with one another
we were much better acquainted and we unlucky souls
who had our pictures critiqued prior to lunch now
knew we could relax and learn for the rest of the
week.
Painting demonstration, June 1994Helen
had a unique gift of being able to simultaneously
paint a subject with her hands and eyes, while continuing
to speak continuously of important, complex painting
issues as she went along. But this ability of hers
made it virtually impossible to take all the needed
notes AND make quick sketches AND to watch what she
was doing. For this reason, we students were frantically
taking notes, sketching examples, asking questions,
and watching her painting progress, all the while
feeling inadequate because we weren't getting it ALL
down on paper. But, I realize now - 5 years later
- the notes I did take, the sketches I was able to
make, and the answers to questions I was able to ask,
set me further ahead as a painter than anything else
I had learned in the previous 40 years.